bonsoir pourriez-vous m'aider s'il vous plait les amis j'aurais juste besoin que vous corrigié mes phrases en anglais, merci. Hello today I tell you about the s
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Hello today I tell you about the school bullying that affects many people, myself I have experienced that. I started by explaining why we can be harassed I will end with the solitons and help that can be obtained, what can we get out
we can be harassed because we are not sociable with our peers, because we have another origin than them, or maybe because we are a little different or different from others, and it's like it starts with little words that hurts you at the beginning but becomes like a knife in the end but that really touches a lot, then it's the big words and the fights, even if it's the last thing you want You do not have the choice either you let yourself be hit and you do nothing, or like me you can fight, but there is a third solution that consider the best today, but when I was little the worst because j would have certainly been ashamed of it, is to talk to adults example teacher parents and the people who are there for that
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1. Réponse alicepinkswag
Voilà ton texte corrigé
J'ai essayé de pas trop le modifier mais tu avais beaucoup de phrases qui voulait rien dire donc voila !
Hello today I am gonna talk to you about school bullying that affects many people, I have myself experienced that. I wil start by explaining why we can be harassed, I will end with the solutions and by the differnet types of help that we can get.
We can be harassed because we are not sociable with our peers, because we have another origin than the bullies, or maybe because we are a little different or different from others, it can start with little words that can hurt you at the beginning and it can even end with a knife, then it's the insults and the fights, even if it's the last thing you want You do not have the choice either you let yourself be hit and you do nothing, or like me you can fight, but there is a third solution that consider the best today, but when I was little the worst because I would have certainly been ashamed of it, it's to talk to adults about it, example teachers parents or the people who are there for that special kind of things