Bonjour pourriez-vous m’aider en corrigeant les fautes s’il vous plaît merci d’avance Hello ! My name is **** I’m 15 years old , I come from à city in the 13th
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Bonjour pourriez-vous m’aider en corrigeant les fautes s’il vous plaît merci d’avance
Hello ! My name is **** I’m 15 years old , I come from à city in the 13th arrondissement in Marseille. I have two older brothers but no sister. I have my two parents who live with me I have a life of the most normal.
In everyday life, I am nother shy and lonely, I am Also a person who hard working to get what she wants. I confess that i am not intellectual I don’t have the best nathing but i do my best to progres an tôt still works!
You are probably wondering why a lonely shy girl of 15 years old would like to go abroad in à country that does know or know nobody
Merci d’avance pour votre aide
Hello ! My name is **** I’m 15 years old , I come from à city in the 13th arrondissement in Marseille. I have two older brothers but no sister. I have my two parents who live with me I have a life of the most normal.
In everyday life, I am nother shy and lonely, I am Also a person who hard working to get what she wants. I confess that i am not intellectual I don’t have the best nathing but i do my best to progres an tôt still works!
You are probably wondering why a lonely shy girl of 15 years old would like to go abroad in à country that does know or know nobody
Merci d’avance pour votre aide
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1. Réponse angelique24
Alors voici ma correction, j'ai fait de mon mieux.
Hello ! My name is **** I’m 15 years old , I come from a neighborhood in the 13th arrondissement of Marseille. I have two older brothers but no sister. I have my two parents who both live with me. I have a life of the most normal ones.
Usually, I am shy and lonely, I am also a person who works hard to get what she wants. I confess that i am not intellectual I don’t have the best grades but i do my best to progres and it works!
You are probably wondering why a lonely and shy 15 years old girl would like to go abroad in a country that she doesn't know and where she knows nobody.