Je pourrais ajouter quoi a cette description : My name is ( *** ) , I’m 13 years old and I live in (***) . I was born the 19 december 1997 in France . I study i
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Je pourrais ajouter quoi a cette description : My name is ( *** ) , I’m 13 years old and I live in (***) . I was born the 19 december 1997 in France . I study in the middle school (***) . I speak French , English and Spanish . I’m short , I have brown eyes and black hair . I’m quiet and patient . I live with my parents , they are fifty years old , I have a sister and a brother they are twenty five years old but they are in France for their studies . My favourite colour is the red because I find this is an alive colour . My favourite sports is the tennis , I like rackets-sports . I’m crazy about computing and video games , this is my passion . I play that since I’m four years old with my brother . Now I collect my games of before . When my brother used to live Guadeloupe for go in France , I talk with him by the mobile only because I was little to use internet , now we play together online with the computer . He wants to come a doctor and my sister wants to come an English teacher . Me , I would like to be a dentist because I like the medical but I hate Blood .
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1. Réponse Anonyme
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2. Réponse amykim12
Je pense que ce serais mieux en changeant quelques petites choses de place ( j'ai aussi effectué quelques corrections ) : My name is ( *** ) and I’m 13 years old. I was born the 19 december 1997 in France . I'm studying at (***) middle school in ( ta ville/ton village ) where I live with my parents who're fifty. I also have a twenty five years sister and brother who are in France for their studies .. ( vivent-ils avec vous en France ou est-ce qu'il sont dans un autre pays ? ) . I’m short, with brown eyes and black hair, I’m quiet and patient and I can speak French , English and Spanish. My favourite colour is the red because I think it's a lively color. I love tennis like all other rackets-sports. I’m crazy about computing and video games , I'm really into that ! I strated playing them with my brother when I was four years old. Now I'm collecting my old games. When my brother was living in Guadeloupe, I used to talk to him on phone only because I was still too young to use the internet. Now we play online computer games together. He wants to become a doctor and my sister wants to become an English teacher. For me, I would like to be a dentist because I like medicine but I hate seeing blood.