(4e Anglais)Bonjour pouvez me corriger mon paragraphe d’anglais, ça m’aiderait beaucoup.Merci d’avance. (Je l’ai écrit au prétérit). During the holidays, I stay
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During the holidays, I stayed at home on Christmas’eve and on Christmas’day. On Christmas’eve I was with my family then we did a long and a big lunch.I had a great time.Next ,in the evening we had open the gifts. We didn’t open them on Christmas morning. I received clothes,money and others things, I had a blast to open my presents. On New Year’s day I was in St Sebastien and I saw a amazing firework. Finally, on the epiphany I didn’t had the bean but my holyfays it was a lot of funny.
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Bonsoir
During the Christmas holidays, I stayed home . (pour ne pas répéter "Christmas Eve et Christmas Day... on Christmas Eve and Christmas Day ==> pas de '). On Christmas Eve, I had lunch with my family. It was a very large traditional meal. (un repas traditionnel très copieux). I had a great time. Then, in the evening we opened the gifts. We didn't do it on Christmas Day. (j'essaie de pas répéter 'open' ) . I got clothes, money and so much more (et beaucoup plus). I had a blast when opening my presents. ("I had the best day ever" ou "I had a great time"...). On New Year's Day, I was in St Sébatien (San Sebastián; si c'est en Espagne, utilise plutôt le nom espagnol plutôt que le français pour un texte en anglais ) and I saw an amazing firework. Finally, on Epiphany, I wasn't lucky enough to get the bean of the "galette des rois" (il n'y a pas de traduction pour cela .. tu peux dire "of the French Epiphany galette" ). However my holidays were really great and I had a lot of fun .
bonne soirée :)