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For this holiday, I went to America with my family to celebrate Christmas and the new year. The first week, I shopped with my mom to buy Christmas presents. To prepare the Christmas dinner, we went to my mother's girlfriend and cooked together. I received many gifts (money, clothes, accessories), the next day I played sports. The second week, we returned to France and we celebrate the new year at an aunt's house in Paris.

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During these holiday, I went to America with my family to celebrate Christmas and the new year. The first week, I went shopping with my mom to buy Christmas presents. To prepare the Christmas dinner, we went to my mother's friend and cooked together. I received many gifts (money, clothes, accessories), the next day I played sports. The second week, we returned to France and we celebrated the new year at an aunt's house in Paris.

I shopped = j'ai magasiné

mother's girlfriend = la petite amie de ma mère